Date: 2008-10-01 08:52 pm (UTC)
Sneaking some time at work to read this and so glad I did.
What a wonderful thing you've written here-I love that it's tied together by the liver bits. And I'm always a sucker for post SR.
Some of my favourite lines:
Hutch didn’t answer, but Starsky could see the clench of his jaw, and recognized the slow deliberate way he moved as he bent once more to claim the spongy globe. Hutch straightened, holding it clenched in his fist.

Such a perfect description of Hutch- holding on and being strong for Starsky and so desperately tired inside.

and

Instead he felt Hutch trembling beneath him and suddenly knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that Hutch would have gone. Would have walked away from him and left him there. Not from anger or spite, but because he believed it needed to be done. He knew it, and knew it would kill them both. Starsky shivered and wrapped himself completely around his partner.

made me a little weak in the knees, that part did.

Please say it won't take 18 months to get another story from you!

Susan
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